I liked the honesty in your poem. It's very easy to put a smile on for the camera but the truth lies behind closed doors and very few get a glimpse inside the reality of what goes on there.

I can relate soooo much to this poem. My family is the same way, everyone thinks we are like the perfect family but we really can't stand each other. Its very well written, I can feel the anger and hurt behind it. Just know ur not alone. and ty for taking the time to read my work, it means a lot to me. 5/5.

Svandyke

I like this and I can even relate to it to an extent. My family will smile for the outside world, but on the inside we can't even all be in the same building at the same time. We never have probably never will. I see your point and it is cool that someone could be so honest. It is extreamly good. (ignore my spelling, Please)