I read this poem last week, three times actually.. & i've been looking for inspiration to write so i've decided to read it again, & of course leave a comment this time round. First off I want to say congrats on the win, it definitly was deserved. Also well done on trying a different form, it definitly looks challenging & i'd love to give it ago. Of course I couldn't pull it off as well as you did here though :P I also understand the dislike of the friendship category.. it is hard to find a verse there of interest without the cliche and I admit I hardly ever go there. So nice choice in placing it here, I would of aswell.
Onto the poem itself.
I enjoyed the use of nouns as Cynnie mentioned above, I think you had some excellent insertions, some clever wording & unique phrases. That's what grasped me with this piece. The elegance of the wording & the cleverness.
Everything is spot on with syllable count as far as I can see, but of course it would be .. as you are like a perfectionist as I am. I liked the meaning behind it, it was great not to read your everyday friendship poem, you went beyond that, you added emotion & depth.. true friendship which was adoring.