This too falls under the category of being quite good. I didn't understand the second stanza though and its purpose in the poem. Please send me a message, I'd love to hear the author's thought on it.

I'm beginning to see that you're really a very good closer. This is the second straight poem where you've pulled of some very powerful stanzas to end the poem, which to me is a sign of a very very good poet.

Keep writing & I'll keep reading!

--ares

I've never been called a good closer before. I like that. Thank you very much Ares, I am really grateful to you for reading my work. I'm really glad for your support!~