Comments : These People are Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was pretty deep, didn't rhyme very well though

  • 12 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Hehe this poem wasnt meant to rhyme. mostof my poems dont

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "The hyper one who is plagued by
    nightmares nightly."
    I think it will be better if you changed 'nightly' to every night. It'll flow better..

    But other than that, great word choice :)

    "The happy one who is secretly depressed."
    And
    "The brave one who is secretly screaming for
    help."
    Are my favorite lines. Very relatable.

    Really enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing :) 5/5

    -X