by Sunshine
Wow...a senru ?or am wrong.. anyway..such a very deep piece! well said..meaningful and deep..msg sent amazingly knowing it is only a 3 lined poem! (form)..u twirl a new step ? |
by Moonlit Candles
This was an awesome haiku. Really liked it. Described so much in such a short poem. I love haikus cause they tell a wonderful story. What I got from this is you finally found that true love in your life. The likening the dance to the relationship, all of a sudden it changes in an instant. So then you have to relearn it all over again. Nice choice of words. :) |