You did a good job for the contest as far as I can tell. I liked how you used Ghandi's quote for pollution and being the change to clean it up bit by bit. Good flow as well. Good job and keep writing.

Very true and WE have to take the first step to make our world a better place..well written!

Beautiful and inspiring.Everything you said make sense only if every human being does their part, what a beautiful place this would be.
Another wonderful piece.
Paul...

I really enjoi your writing, keep up the good work :)

Nice poem, and a very bold messege. Eventhough, I couldn't ignore the flow being disturbed in some parts in this poem. The planet is soon to be a place of living no longer, if pollusion shall keep growing in this rate. Liked the way and words you chose to pass the idea, but again, the broken sentences here and there disturbed me a little. Gave it 4/5

I wish this poem was longer. It feels as if you were cut off half way through you spill. I do love the message and the use of the quote in this poem. Well done.
And thank you for the read.
>~Spirit~>

I wish this poem was longer. It feels as if you were cut off half way through you spill. I do love the message and the use of the quote in this poem. Well done.
And thank you for the read.
>~Spirit~>