This was good, feels you talking of the coming of a new age & my poem "Ill Always Love You, Big Bro" was actually a song I made, not an official one, so to speak, but it's meant to be one.

Hi i liked this simply because it covers the subject of global warming and mans callous role in it, there were one or two things that i felt that were slightly overdone but its your poem and you know the effect you wanted to create. Just thought maybe a little less fancy words and concentrate more on the emotions. Well done . Grant

Hi i liked this simply because it covers the subject of global warming and mans callous role in it, there were one or two things that i felt that were slightly overdone but its your poem and you know the effect you wanted to create. Just thought maybe a little less fancy words and concentrate more on the emotions. Well done . Grant