I thought that this was a great poem. You describe the feelings of a lost love so well that I can imagine myself right in that place.

Anthony
Very deep and intense emotion from this piece.

Hours, maybe days pass by
my paralysis has taken root,
there is no pain, there is nothing
as my existence fades into obscurity.

After the pain of losing someone we love. Our feelings become numb. Helping to mask the pain. Does it ever really disappear?
Great job!
Take care
Cindy