Wowwwww
thisss piece is really goodd
I love the flow and its just perfectly written.

Im going through a very similar situation rite now in my life and i know how it is. I can relate to this poem a lot. I especially love this part:

I guess I didn't do enough,
to hold onto you, that's my luck,
I guess I didn't do the stuff,
you wanted me to, and now I'm stuck,
now I'm alone, I've lost my hope,
don't know what to do, 'cause you are gone,
got no one to turn to, I'm all alone,
what do I do, I can't hold on,

Its really gooddd!!
Definitely going in my favs :))

Wow this is a really nice and touchy poem. reminds me of my ex but i'm so over him now. but yeah, keep up the good work!