by krisstarah May 25, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
One pop, two pop |
Very interesting poem. It is smiliar to an event that happened to me years ago, that could have cost me my own life. The pattern of repetition in this poem helps it flow nicely. Since the lines are so short, I can see this would be difficult, but I would love more description of the scene, so I can picture that moment better. Nice poem. |