by Wishmaster May 25, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Take all you want from me |
I like the last line I thought it was very strong and true, but the rest of the poem was just average. I felt the rhymes were a bit mediocre and you could have brought a lot more to the table with this piece. It wasn't horrible, but at the same time it didn't blow me away. I think that deserves a 4/5 |