One like you exists

by East Poetry   May 26, 2010


I know the point when liking,
quickly turns to love.
When I opened up my diary,
And you were all of the above.

Having all the characteristics,
of the hopes I wrote on you.
With a check in all the boxes,
that are too good to be true.

And I cant wait to tell you,
just exactly how I feel.
That we're destine for each other
and my desires for you are real.

That the simple feeling of your presence,
makes every sense in me ignite!
How your kiss defines true passion,
and I savor every bite.

Your so attentive to the details
And they're "So" the perfect kind!
Quenching softly over every thought
That stirs inside my mind.

The mere existence of your presence,
causes me to lose control.
as if erupting with emotion
making music leave my soul.

Your expressions and your actions,
And all the touching things you say.
Its like a symphony in perfect rhythm.
and on my heart you play.

Never once have I been treated,
like the way you make me feel.
Until the moment that I met you,
I just thought it wasn't real.

And now I finally realize
as if escaping clouds of mist
That... not only are you souly mine.

...but that one like you exists.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    Ridiculously good! It's just.. ahh so good. I recommend this to everyone!

  • 12 years ago

    by ChrisT

    This poem is absolutely amazing i could read this over and over very well penned its something that reminds me of my girlfriend ^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    This reminds me of the things my boyfriend has said to me. Oh my gosh. You have penned this beautifully. You are truly a great poet honestly.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    So there are rhymers left on this site, and you do it so well. A very nice poem that just flows along without stopping or stuttering anywhere. I love-love poems. especially ones that shine this bright, therefor impossible to pick a favorite stanza cause they all are wonderful.

    Poems like these in this format well written are my weakness. Another great one from you.

    She must be some girl. Pen on Randy!

  • 13 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    Very nice flow to the poem. I liked how you kept the words simple.

    Never once have I been treated,
    Like the way you make me feel.

    That is gold, no actually platinum. Nice work