Comments : One like you exists

  • 14 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Wow! I love this poem :) Great job, and keep writing. 5/5
    <@> Bloomed Rose

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I know the point when liking someone
    quickly turns to love.
    When I open up my diary,
    And you're all of the above

    ^^ extremely well written and great way to start this poem off!

    Hence your expressions and your actions,
    along with all the touching things you say.
    Its Like a symphony in perfect rhythm.
    and on my heart you play.

    ^^ This stanza was just beautiful!! I mean I don't really know how to express how much I loved it!..

    The whole poem over all was an enjoyable read for me. I thought it was so nicely written and I'm looking forward to reading more

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I never get tired of love poems and this one is very original. I would not change a thing

  • 13 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    Very nice flow to the poem. I liked how you kept the words simple.

    Never once have I been treated,
    Like the way you make me feel.

    That is gold, no actually platinum. Nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    So there are rhymers left on this site, and you do it so well. A very nice poem that just flows along without stopping or stuttering anywhere. I love-love poems. especially ones that shine this bright, therefor impossible to pick a favorite stanza cause they all are wonderful.

    Poems like these in this format well written are my weakness. Another great one from you.

    She must be some girl. Pen on Randy!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    This reminds me of the things my boyfriend has said to me. Oh my gosh. You have penned this beautifully. You are truly a great poet honestly.

  • 12 years ago

    by ChrisT

    This poem is absolutely amazing i could read this over and over very well penned its something that reminds me of my girlfriend ^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    Ridiculously good! It's just.. ahh so good. I recommend this to everyone!