by Love Fallacy May 27, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Finally getting ready, |
by WintersAngel
This is such a good message. Very deep story with a sad ending. Great poem. |
by DeviousCharmer
This was amazing! made me cry. wether it was true or not it touched me. so vidid so i must think it is true. so sorry for the friends that have died. poor choices leads to poor consequences. hopefully lessoned learned |
by Kate
Wow... this is a heart-tugging piece. It truly is. It's tragic, sad... I love the rhyming you have and how you added that parental view on the issue. |
This was beautiful poetry, I'v too lost a best friend from drinking and driving.. I'll never forget that day. This was wonderful. I can't wait to read more of your writing. |