This was beautiful poetry, I'v too lost a best friend from drinking and driving.. I'll never forget that day. This was wonderful. I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Anastazia <3
xo

Wow... this is a heart-tugging piece. It truly is. It's tragic, sad... I love the rhyming you have and how you added that parental view on the issue.
I could have lost my sister earlier this year, she was drinking and driving, speeding as well. She flipped her car, there were passengers inside. She barely missed a pole by one foot. Had she hit it, she would have died. This poem made me tear up a little... so tragic, but beautifully written and presses a very important issue.

This was amazing! made me cry. wether it was true or not it touched me. so vidid so i must think it is true. so sorry for the friends that have died. poor choices leads to poor consequences. hopefully lessoned learned

This is such a good message. Very deep story with a sad ending. Great poem.