This was kinda like a description of a scene in a fairytale. very nice

Simple :] my kind of poem. I loved the imagery in piece. It helps the reads see what you saw when you wrote this. Like the person aove sad it's just like a fairy tale with a twist and I liked that about this poem. I love how feel it flows too, just like a real story. I wouldn't change a thing about this. Nice work dear. Nik

Hmmm. I liked it. I can imagine a girl sitting by herself all lonely when this cute guy comes up and asks her to dance, and they both have an amazing time. *sad smile* I've been in that circumstance. It's very sad when it's just a one-time-thing and then you leave. Even so, masqurades are incrediably fun XD

Actually, theres another way I see this poem thats how I look at the whole idea of a masqurade..and thats more that you never know how a person really is inside because most put on masks all the time, not just at a dance..reminds me everyone hides a part of themselves from others.