Comments : If only, if only

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    I really really like this one! Amazing job! Going into my favourites for sure!

    Great use of repetition. I found it to be extremely effective and meaningful. This poem just touched me:]

    Amazing job!

  • 14 years ago

    by COCO

    I really really love it.... it had me thinkin so much truth....... good job keep it up