A deep and sad poem. The word play in every stanza fixed a motive, I liked the use you put to it.
The words you used were a bit shallow and low leveled, the curse you put there ruined the flow a bit.
The sentence I'd go back to the when I first met you is better put: I'd go back to when I first met you.

Hope I helped... 4/5

Wow this is a really nice and sad poem. i like the way you wrote this poem, cuz you put the situations in order. kinda like reminds me of this one guy in the past. but yeah, keep on writing more of these sad poems aight!!