I didn't hate the poem, but I didn't love it either. It wasn't even really a poem to me it was more like a story and the way it read was kind of annoying. You had no form and the flow was decent at best. I would maybe rearrange some words and make the lines and "stanzas" a lot stronger and it might be a little better. Gave it an honest 4/5 |
Thoughts wander freely, |