This is has another feel to it than the previous I read and it works for you. This has more of a "how did it come to this" kinda feel yet a finger of blame can be seen here aswell, which is something that's really hard to pull off without sounding whiney.

You kept the reader reading on even though at first glimpse it's a regular love poem, but you rounded it off so nicely and it turned out to be something different. This I have nothing but respect for. A favorite addy if I ever saw one.

--ares

This made me speechless
the last two lines of this are just wow amazing. :)
Keep writing your greeat :D
~Miranda

You are one of few! Keep true to yourself, you are a blessing!:)