Trying to not let go

by Maria   Jun 2, 2010


I'm surprised you cant see,
all the lies behind me.

Though I look at you with a smile,
the lies have been following for awhile.

I tell you that I love you,
and with that I no longer feel blue.

But the truth is, thats a lie,
it's so tiring, I just don't wanna try.

The memory of us is fading,
moments of us, are no longer our thing.

I'm holding my insanity from creeping,
but baby, I fear i'm already weeping.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ares

    This is very good and I absolutely adored it. The honesty in the words and the flow of your rhymes really worked for you and made the poem a pleasure to read.

    Even though it has a sad message and a feel of confession to it, I almost felt like there was something upbeat about it aswell, like there was a sense of relief somewhere in the poem.

    Anyways, real nice job on this one. I will keep reading.

    --ares

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