Comments : Flower Child

  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Shes can enjoy the
    rays of light like a flower child should

    ^
    very very lovely
    well done

  • 14 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A very joyful poem. This subject is pretty common, someone who overcame a tragedy in his life now lives on happily. I liked the way you presented the change in her situation. From being sad and alone, she became like the other girls, happy, and playing. With the support of her parents, and little bear too, she's now the flower girl, happier than ever.
    Liked it all the way through 5/5