This is possibly the best poem I've read all week. It has a rythm, it has a great language which shows me that there's a lot of talent in you. It also had the best line of poetry I've read in a very, very long time.

"I fear I grow no boundary of heartache."

This is top, top-class. It's soare yet powerful, it's a line where you expose so much by saying so little. I really, really enjoyed that.

--ares