by John Long Jun 5, 2010
category :
Life, society /
about society
Sunlight ricochets from the razor wire onto |
Yes. |
by abracadabra
It's been a while since I've read your poetry, John. I disagree with Ingrid's above depiction of your poem. This poem speaks with bitter irony, yes, but I feel it was only written this way to highlight the beauty that Ingrid alluded to, especially in your last stanza, which is written to heart-wrenching perfection and links to your first stanza almost magically, seamlessly. |
by Jackie
A good poem, very deep. 5/5 |
by Ingrid
John, |