I think the title suits perfectly well for the content of the poem. As a reader I can feel the loneliness of going through life without your other half. Life just feels incomplete as the days passed by. Nice rhyming you got there, but if I were to suggest one thing, I would say to break the poem into stanzas, but if you feel that you want it to be this way, I guess it's still fine. Other than that Great work.

I really liked this. I could relate to this at one point as well. Some of it didn't flow very well, but overall the meaning was great. You got your point across and it came through strongly. Good job.

I love this poem!!! So amazingly written I can definitely relate so I hope things get better :)