First and formost, I am commenting more so on the subject of this poem. If you don't learn to love yourself you will never be able to achieve this perfection you seek. If you are 93 pounds- it is thin, regardless of height even. And if you are tall, it is possibly very unhealthy. Beauty isn't in weight, or the size of pants you wear. Beauty comes from within. And even though I have never seen you, I can tell you are a very beautiful and talented young woman. I have nothing bad to say about the poem itself and admire the fact it was short and definitely to the point.
Anyway this is just my opinion.

Good read and good write-

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