Comments : Swear, I feel you in house of God

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    So many whispers
    Hours of talk
    Millions of plan
    Promises to be one
    In sunshine and rain
    Feeling the heat
    When you are in pain
    Before victories were lost
    With you every lose is gain
    I always fell down
    But
    You can hold me on the spot
    Swear, I feel you in house of God
    Loving without reason
    Romance without season

    ^^

    plus your closing lines

    are the besssssstttttttttt part of this, which i see as a master piece

    the snow, yes,no, go, parts really spoiled it but am in WOW!!!
    well done............

  • 13 years ago

    by Dj Rizwan Khurram

    Thanks

  • 13 years ago

    by Dj Rizwan Khurram

    You know i use yes and no... in a way that when people love somone they become accustomed to speak in a style of beloved so i said saying like you yes and without thinking no