Beautiful :)

WOH.. you have done a Wonderful job with this Nik! ... Awesome stuff :) Lol. A triple Rictameter? COOL :))

Beautifully worded... I loved the title too.
WELL DONE!

I love the style used here. This was a beautiful poem! Well written.

Again nice writing. The structure was flawless offcourse, but I didn't like the broken lines much. I know it's for the sake of the genere, but the flow was cut a few times because of this. There were few to none rhymes in this piece. Although that, the writing was indeed briliant, the images, and words you put into this poem matched and pictured a very bold image. nice work 5/5

This one. :]

Wow, amazing (:

You were the humidity of the night
now I must lay with brittle sheets

this is the best line of a poem i have ever read i love your stuff read some of mine you might like

HOLY COW..this was awesome! I'm jealous I wish I could write one this well!!...I agree with Alicia...those two lines were also my favorite! Very nicely penned, and the flow was just awesome!
Chels

Wow ... that was amazing, for some reason it sent a little chill up my spine. I loved it, the ending stanza was just .... perfect. good work (Y)

I think this is done really well as your poems usually are haha I enjoyed the honesty your words had when talking above love and heartbreak. Even if we know we're unhappy its often so hard to break lose of the love thats slowly killing us. No matter how bad things get the lake can only stay frozen for so long :) Fantastic job with this piece it was very unique and strong all the way through. 5/5 from me well done

"Frozen
over like a
lake in a bad snowstorm."
I really like this simile(:
I really liked your poem too, the stanzas were unique looking. and your words were strong. Keep up the good work.