AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWit's so sweet and a realy new writing style for you...I love it hun.^_^

Aww... this poem is so beautiful and sweet! I love it! You captured me from the title and the very start... I loved how it started as simply about a boy somewhere in the world, and a girl somewhere else... and it ended with happily ever after. It was surprisingly unexpected. Great job!

Just like a fairy tale! :)

its so true. the waiting. hopefully i'll find find mine someday. lovely write.

~Kuro

Haha, this is a good example, to me, of how Jehovah sometimes directs certain people to each other so that they can have a chance at being together, whereas otherwise they probably wouldn't give each other a second glance. Very nice.

This is so amazing! There is imagery, and you deffinatly hit the nail on the head with the emotion. I love this poem so so much!!!

Somewhere out there
beyond magnolias and live oaks
the boy longs for the person
to possess a part of his heart
waiting for her to come

^^ Is my favorite stanza, though I really don't know why. Anyway I have taken up enough of your time. 5/5, wonderful job!

Love this poem! Emotional and sweet! I love that you change from boy to girl each time.
Somewhere out there
beyond magnolias and live oaks
the boy longs for the person
to possess a part of his heart
waiting for her to come

Somewhere out there
beyond her wildest dreams
the girl sits patiently
while reminiscing on days of old
waiting for her prince to come
^^
My favourite part! They are alright to sit and wait for true love to come. Which is the it should happen! True love will find you in the end! :)
Was a beautiful poem to read! 5/5