Comments : Perhaps ,I.

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow Yaki, I really like this write from you, I like the whole repetitious 'Perhaps, I' in your craft. It does work for me and how each stanza talks about the protagonist being a different character. Nicely done yaki;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Perhaps I who am not worthy to comment will say that this is another masterpiece