Awesome.......just awesome :) I am going to say best poem ever. sad.....but still very beautiful. Now you just need to smile for me :)

S very nice poem, especially liked the way you described all the noises that you hear while you sleep, the cars, crickets and so on. You say the your heart belongs to the stars, but later on you say that there's someone new who means the world to you, which is conflicting a bit, but the meaning is still bold enough. Liked the writing, the rhyming was good as well. Nothing I have to comment about 5/5