Comments : These Scars.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    "And though the skies are dark with ash
    And the sea is filled with fire;

    Though my mind is filled with confusion
    And my heart filled with desire..."

    Such powerful and emotive language is placed within this poem, you certainly knew what you were writing about. I love the flow of this poem and the desire in the end.
    I love that song also, it inspired me to write one of my poems also. They're a great band.

    Yours truly,
    Sharni. xx