Before i comment about your poem, i would just like to say thank you for the advice about my poem :)

unfortunately i dont have any for yours!
this was an interesting read. its really different from what i usually read, and i like that.

"I don't want
to sacrifice insanity for hallucinated control
spiderwebs that catch no fly but
simply become tangled in my muse's hair"
^ that bit there was written really nicely. When i read good poems, i get this weird feeling in my body, its hard to explain, but when i read that, i felt it!

all in all, 5/5
lovely!