My baby doll ...

by lemmemaskmyhorror   Jun 13, 2010


While you breathed inside of me
i felt so strong ...

everytime you moved
mommy made sure you are secure ...

mum and dad used to fight alot
but you were the reason we were never apart ...

waitin for you seemed so endless
the day finally came - leaving me hopeless ...

you broke me down, i held you tight
my baby doll - gone so far ...

i never knew
thats how ill see you ...

my baby girl
lying still ...

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  • 10 years ago

    by don

    Heartfelt words girl, full of emotion this poem

    don

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this piece is so simple, so short, so full of depth. It took me a few reads to see everything, but I am glad I did because this is amazing. Heartrending but very good. The emotion is subtle so as not to disturb the story, which I thought was nice. The story itself is conveyed so effortlessly that it is perfect. Great descriptions to tell that story as well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    I am so very sorry...I know this pain...im so so so sorry

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