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Another excellent write the ending blew
me away

A sad poem, but thee way you spell it out takes my breath away. Amazing poem.

Wow this is a good poem , I loved the dark aura too it, there's always darkness when you write about your past in some way i really liked these lines

Horrified of whats to come,
haunted by the past.
Isolated and broken,
happiness fading fast.

nice wording , got your message across nicely and it really is just an amazing poem :)