Wow! That's the best poem I've read in a while.

Very well written, so beautiful. I loved the ending, and the images you created within your words! 5/5

mandy :)

This is going on my favorites straight away, I really don't know what to say but beautiful work, you have a talent for reaching out to the reader and placing your senses and feelings into the hearts of others. I loved your unique setup of the poem itself, and how much original imagery was elegantly portrayed. I enjoyed myself greatly, thanks for sharing dear!

~MaryAnne

God bless you always...