by Chelsey Jun 20, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
He's mad; He's angry, bitter towards me |
by Lady Nik
:[ I know how you feel. It's such an awful feeling to love someone who can't see that. It's also a beautiful feeling at the same time. You'd rather suffer the pain then have them gone forever. I think you expressed those feelings in this piece very well. I loved the flow of things very simple and constant. A very well written piece. Nik |
by chind
I really like how you started your stanza's with 'Dear Daniel', it created this nice effect to your work. |