I really like how you started your stanza's with 'Dear Daniel', it created this nice effect to your work.

I can also really feel the emotion that you are trying to express through this poem. nice work :) i like it!

:[ I know how you feel. It's such an awful feeling to love someone who can't see that. It's also a beautiful feeling at the same time. You'd rather suffer the pain then have them gone forever. I think you expressed those feelings in this piece very well. I loved the flow of things very simple and constant. A very well written piece. Nik