Their country song

by Chelsey   Jun 20, 2010


Based on a true story :)

It was Friday night and there was nothing to do in town
The sun was out, 8 o'clock; it was too early to lie down
So she borrowed her daddies truck, picked him up at 9
Drove out to the country, snuck right past the drive-ins line

They parked the 4 door, laid blankets and pillows in the bed
He wrapped his arms around her; on his shoulders she placed her head
He was into the movie; she was fascinated with the sky
It was fun, romantic to her, alone with her guy

It was chilly, they lay down, and she kissed his cheek
A moment of comfort between them, neither of them had to speak
And a thought sparked in her mind, "let's not worry about the cars"
He on top of her, they made love under the stars

Amazing, blissful, a thrill for him and her
They rocked the night with the passion they had stirred
She fell asleep in his lap, he caressed her hair
Neither one forgetting of the night they had spent there

She woke up the next day and wrote a country song
For her and him one day to smile and sing a long
"We snuck into the drive-ins, when we saw no one could see
In the bed of my daddy's truck, he made love to me".....

She played on her guitar, and she sang of what went down
On the night where there was nothing to do in their town

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow..it doesn't get more real then this. This was like a Taylor Swift song or something :] so heart warming and beautiful. I loved the imagery and how serene it made me feel. A very creative piece from the heart that I'm sure many people can relate to. I really liked this one. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by CODACHROME

    Wow. .

    This poem is really good. . I liked how your poem told a story. .
    the rhyming was good and the flow was great. .
    Keep writing I enjoy reading ur work. .

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    Ohh loved loved this! i like how it was written like a story, and it was very well written, the rhyming, the flow, it was all perfect. nice work! and as ^ said, Cute!

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    So the lesson to young kids here is..... If your bored just have sex hahaha nice job made me think of my fiancee :) 5/5