So the lesson to young kids here is..... If your bored just have sex hahaha nice job made me think of my fiancee :) 5/5

Ohh loved loved this! i like how it was written like a story, and it was very well written, the rhyming, the flow, it was all perfect. nice work! and as ^ said, Cute!

Wow. .

This poem is really good. . I liked how your poem told a story. .
the rhyming was good and the flow was great. .
Keep writing I enjoy reading ur work. .

Wow..it doesn't get more real then this. This was like a Taylor Swift song or something :] so heart warming and beautiful. I loved the imagery and how serene it made me feel. A very creative piece from the heart that I'm sure many people can relate to. I really liked this one. Nik