A deep poem that made me feel very sad for marriages that never go right and as a teenage guy who has neither one of his parents I know this pain in a different way. You have described the emotions well and also the feelings that arise when you lose someone so dear to you and you are separated from them. The poem itself was nicely worded and the flow was good as well. Great job and keep writing.

Thank u, i appreciate your comments, see sadly i dont have both my prants an coz of my relationship i was forced to leave my child with out both her perants