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shame!!! cause let me put in words wat i incredibly felt...reading ur poem

And I'm lost.
Lost in the music that belongs to you.
>>this is the softiest...line ive seen from a poet..loved it..took me to another world..

I've known you long before you found your feet.
I've loved you long before you found your feet.
I've loved you, but little did I know,
And great is the sentiment attached to your name.

>> my god..this stanza how sad yet Happy..yet full of LOve..

I fear the dejection at my doorstep,
Waiting, from whence you come
To tell me you love, but as a friend
And not more.
>>> what an ending..amazingly worded
these lines i pasted here...cause they been the lines tha left such an impact ..in my heart

the hardest love..is the un-noticed one..wen u llove someone..and this someone tends to be a friend of yours..who u love deep enough not to reveal ur true feelings aiming to keep them, or not to lose them..

you have expressed ur emotions in a beautiful..sad way.
but In ur shoes..I would only pass forward my heart..for a frnd who takes not ur heart..at least takes care of it.. :)

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