by Anthony M Jun 23, 2010
category :
Life, society /
about society
Wet, ice cold, sweating profusely |
by Sourav
This is a very good write. The emotion and the thoughtfulness of this poem is touchy. Liked it. |
by NightFlyer
Very interesting perspective of society from the eyes of a bar glass. A neat poem! |
I agree very original, If I were you I wouldn't give away what you were talking about in the title, it's more exciting to have it as a mystery & then reveal it at the end like you have . Just a thought. Awesome write though! |
by Jad
Unique. I really liked how you gave voice to a glass. I enjoyed reading it. Good job and keep writing. |
Nice write, I fully enjoyed reading this piece. Keep up the wonderful work! |