by Sylvia
How original, a voice given to a bar glass. If only that glass could talk, think of the many stories it would have to tell. Well done. |
Nice write, I fully enjoyed reading this piece. Keep up the wonderful work! |
by Jad
Unique. I really liked how you gave voice to a glass. I enjoyed reading it. Good job and keep writing. |
I agree very original, If I were you I wouldn't give away what you were talking about in the title, it's more exciting to have it as a mystery & then reveal it at the end like you have . Just a thought. Awesome write though! |
by NightFlyer
Very interesting perspective of society from the eyes of a bar glass. A neat poem! |
by Sourav
This is a very good write. The emotion and the thoughtfulness of this poem is touchy. Liked it. |