Joe, had to give you a 5 on this for the form and style of writing. It is a bit difficult to understand without really stopping to look up most of the words although after reading it several times, I think it is becoming clearer to me. Well done.

I agree with Sylvia. I had to look up tons of words but again you have made an excellent poem. Hope to see more of this good work from you. Good job and keep writing.

I remember reading this and not really knowing the meaning behind some of the words , but I always like a challenge when I read poetry. But a challenge can be enjoyable as well, you can learn so much from it and it only helps you and the writer grow as a poet. We all learn from each other. Very nicely done.

What to say ?
that title alone stood as poem.
amazingly poetic !

and then how u opened it was just interesting and incredibly catchy ..
ur realy gd when ur taking nature into ur poetic side..

While-ere oelliad freed
constantly agazed anight
incliping her fair labras.

got some new vocabs for myself..haha
enjoyed the read..and the reread lol :)
5/5