Decadent tree.

by Sean   Jun 24, 2010


Decadent tree grew in loneliness,
twisted contorted shape; sheltered few.
Dull drudgery rooted in toxicity,
reaching bluntly for starving forget.

Bashed root stumbles into new spring,
tasting ecstasy with every swallow;
sweet relief in innocent bliss,
a taste fresh with nourishing forgive.

Decadent tree, grew in happiness,
drudgery flowered with angelic taste.
The heart of the water in flowing faith,
now beats in the heart of a newborn tree.

Sean 2010,
Thank you Lucy.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This was interesting and great,,,loved how you worded it,very fantastic just left me at wow
    :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Keep writing ;);)coz:
    i really like your way
    you just know how to express your thoughts
    bravo

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Awwww i loveeeeeee
    this piece...Indeed thanks lucy if you're the inspiration.. oh dude this is fabulous !!!

    amazing word choice; great punctuation..subtle wording and supreme beauty through the meaning.

    I love evrything about this piece..especially these lines :
    Decadent tree grew in loneliness,
    twisted contorted shape; sheltered few.

    ^^^
    just breathing taking..

    Decadent tree, grew in happiness,
    drudgery flowered with angelic taste.
    ^^
    I adoreee how u repeated yet change the state of this treee.as if this company changed the way this tree if feeling and gave a new fresh air..and a greater meaning for life

    The heart of the water in flowing faith,
    now beats in the heart of a newborn tree

    ^^^

    I think the ending was just fabulous..well done
    a well deserved piece!
    5/5
    keep writing
    --
    Sunshine

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