Awwww i loveeeeeee
this piece...Indeed thanks lucy if you're the inspiration.. oh dude this is fabulous !!!

amazing word choice; great punctuation..subtle wording and supreme beauty through the meaning.

I love evrything about this piece..especially these lines :
Decadent tree grew in loneliness,
twisted contorted shape; sheltered few.

^^^
just breathing taking..

Decadent tree, grew in happiness,
drudgery flowered with angelic taste.
^^
I adoreee how u repeated yet change the state of this treee.as if this company changed the way this tree if feeling and gave a new fresh air..and a greater meaning for life

The heart of the water in flowing faith,
now beats in the heart of a newborn tree

^^^

I think the ending was just fabulous..well done
a well deserved piece!
5/5
keep writing
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Sunshine

Keep writing ;);)coz:
i really like your way
you just know how to express your thoughts
bravo

This was interesting and great,,,loved how you worded it,very fantastic just left me at wow
:) 5/5