I agree with monkey shines. You sooo need to finish this poem. It is awesome!! I love it. But I would love it more if it were finished. lol. Can't wait to read it when it is. :)

I definitly enjoyed reading this one alot. The feeling of treading lightly and waiting for the storm to hit is very much prescent and it makes the reader feel like something is going to happen. I really, really enjoyed it and I'll be keeping a look out for more of your poetry.

--ares

Wow!! I absolutely love this poem! The title caught my eye ... but the meaning and the actual poem really touched me! I feel that way sometimes so I could definitely relate... I loved the poem as a whole... It flowed so perfectly and the ending couldn't have been written better! Great job with this poem... It's a favorite of mine!

Yay!!!! You finished it!! I am so glad that you did, because it turned out amazing!!!! I just had to comment again to tell you that. Wonderful Job! :)

Very good piece of writing :]]
really can relate

5/5