"turles" should be "turtles".

I love this fresh and unique write because not only did the words flow while I read them but out in front of my eyes appeared many images, emotional and thoughtful.

God bless you and Happy Fourth of July!

~MaryAnne

Debbie
The imagery you have painted with your words is heart wrenching. To see everythng being effected from the oil spill breaks my heart. All the wild life and the livlyhood of so many. This will still be effecting things for 100's of years.
Great piece
Love Cindy

Not much to say here, very well done all around. Deserving of a 5/5 even though its rather short..... you earned it.

This is such a great piece of work.
You've captured such anger and resentment. Nature is so innocent, and this poem shows how ugly man kind can be.
A beautifully horrific image comes across in every line.

Well done.

X__x
Mankind's to thank for this, you definitely were able to get that through to the reader in a pretty startling way, actually. Now I'm frowning :(
Still, I like this - A well-penned eye-opener
Unfortunately /:

5/5