It was a secret

by CaptainTyingKnots   Jun 30, 2010


It was a secret
Hidden well
No one had a clue

It was a secret
I was forced to keep
To never tell

It was a secret
I had no problem
Keeping between me and you

It was a secret
I kept
So that I could keep you

It was a secret
Now just an empty lie
A hollow good-bye

It was a secret
Hidden between sheet covers
But not shared by 2 lovers

It was a secret
For 2 reasons
2 reasons without the same intentions

It was a secret
To you it was because
I was just a place holder until the new arrived

It was a secret
To me because
I thought it'd make you stay

It was a secret
Hidden well
One I could never tell

But that's when it matter
Before my heart was shattered
It's a secret

But I don't wanna keep it now
I wanna forget it somehow
It's a secret

It's eating me up
Tearing me apart inside
But it's a secret

And I promised
I'll never tell

PLEASE RATE && COMMENT. IT'D MEAN ALOT AND I CAN DALOT FOR YOU IF YOU LET ME KNOW YOU WANT ME TO

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    It was good, made you wonder what the secret is. I would recommend changing the 2's to "two"'s as well as "but that's when it matterED" :)

    Jessie

  • 14 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I liked it thoght it flowed good and made me think what's the secret lol good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Miranda

    I like it.. alot. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by CaptainTyingKnots

    Ik what u mean Mr. Rhee, about the broken flow i just couldn't think of how to put it at the time and it was a quick write. i intend to fix but when the right words to explain it come to me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    You either broke the rhyme, or didn't really intend to. I was just getting into the flow when it went other way. A nice piece just the same. Your distress came through.

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By CaptainTyingKnots